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I know at times I'm not quite there,
But my heart sprints for every step that I lose.

I know at times it seems like I don't listen,
But to me, everything you could ever say is worth hearing twice.

I know at times I'm not exactly your prince,
Let's face it, I more resemble the horse he rides upon.

But if you're the perfect picture, then I'm the humble frame,
So I become worth a thousand words and more, just like you.

But if you're a beautiful rose, then I'm your angry thorns,
Not pretty, but always there to protect you.

But if you ever need someone to love you undyingly, then I'm there, listening, and in my shining armor.

I love you.
©2005-2009 ~oujisama
:iconoujisama:

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A poem I wrote for Loretta today in school for her 17th Bday. Love you.

Sorry I'm not all that impressive...it hurts when I can't be what you need me to be.

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:iconerle40:
Hey...your sweatpants aren't shiny......

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Faced with apathy, I will take action.
:iconzajon-lumtok:
That's very nice, Mike. Good element of humility and sweetness in there. *two thumbs up*

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"You're going to have to learn just as I did that there's a difference between knowing the Path, and walking It."
:iconkhorypendragon:
X3

Awe, so sweet, just like you ^^

*Hugs, sends Lora happy birthday mishes, though she doesn't really know her ^^' *

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What do you think?
:iconservistre:
A true love is expressd
in this poem, to the person you address.
A deep care for her you possess
while wishing she was always there for you to caress.
:iconb-boysquid:
Whoasnap, you just mean your dick is big. No one else is gonna catch that.

Man...this is pretty cool. I love it.

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You can only do what you train to do

"They say it's 'we the people' but it's we who are weak; we love to bitch but forgot how to speak"
:iconoujisama:
I only thought of it like that when I saw that you replied to my poem. =D

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"O que eu tenho,
Foi Deus quem me deu.
Na roda de capoeira,
Grande e pequeno sou eu."
:iconcole0123:
So sweet. Your so nice to write that for her. I'll bet she loved it :aww:

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Even if you try not to be anything you will always be something, because you are alive and have lived this far...

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